Having her evaluate his sales pitch is a bit nerve-wracking given how much thought he puts into the wording, but he trusts her to be honest yet not unnecessarily brutal. Though it seems some brutality is needed in this case. He looks crestfallen at the word 'fishy.']
What's so fishy about it?! It's direct and to the point and perfectly sums up what I'm good at, so why--? [Enlighten him, plz!]
CRYYYYYYYY
Having her evaluate his sales pitch is a bit nerve-wracking given how much thought he puts into the wording, but he trusts her to be honest yet not unnecessarily brutal. Though it seems some brutality is needed in this case. He looks crestfallen at the word 'fishy.']
What's so fishy about it?! It's direct and to the point and perfectly sums up what I'm good at, so why--? [Enlighten him, plz!]